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Footnotes: In this page the suspense is over, there is no hot lesbian action, or at least not yet. But really, just the idea of two cute girls touching each other like that to me is slightly erotic. I've kep the rest of the page relativly mundane, the heart is supposed to be recovering from the excitement of the contact there. The expressions are deliberatley non descript. In retrospect, I think they might be too non descript as you could be forgiven for thinking that there was some terrible tragedy in the household...... Well, I guess, I would rule that out if the reader wants to consider that as a reason for their behaviour. This story was going to be called Maid Maid, but I decided that that was too informative, but I think its clear that one of the girls is more in control than the other. I spent alot of time trying to make sure that the girls faces where perfect in every panel. I figured that as long as the face was perfect then the reader would be happy, and a suspension of disbelief would put everything else into its place. Note the darkness of the outside of the building in the last panel. I think I did too much detail into the brick work and too much cross hatching and its just a black mess, now read the next page.....